As I write this, I have just understood the twelve learning principles we need to learn that week. At that time, I thought I had written well, but after several weeks of study, when I read through this article again, I found many shortcomings in my writing at that time.

The original one
After I update it

First of all, I made a more detailed analysis of some of my views and listed more specific examples. In fact, I find myself habitually describing theory and reasoning in most of my writing. This is certainly an essential part of explaining something, but it is actually less accessible to the reader’s experience than a concrete example. Therefore, I have included part of my childhood learning experience in my updated blog, which will make it easier for readers to understand the differences between Chinese and Canadian education models and their results. I will pay more attention to this in future writing.

Secondly, I found that in the very beginning of my blog, I also mentioned my coping methods in the face of the new learning mode. I think this is too general and fails to express the connection between my personal understanding of learning life and the knowledge I have learned in this course. Therefore, I further elaborated the study methods and personal views that I think are desirable. Of course, I hope that the free and easy learning mode can be popularized all over the world, because it can more effectively stimulate students’ learning motivation, but based on the social situation in China, I think there is still a long way to go.

Finally, in the original blog, I added a video at the end of the blog. This video is the most viewed video on learning principles I’ve ever found on YouTube. At the time, I thought that the video with the most views would best support of the point I was making in this article. But I have to admit that when I’m reading an article, unless it’s a necessary instructional video, I mostly fast-forward and don’t really get to the end of it. This should also be a common problem for most people. So I added a simple picture to my blog post after the latest changes. I think it’s more obvious than a few minutes of video. And in the future writing, I will probably use pictures more frequently to support my argument.

The above is my update. I hope to make progress with everyone in the remaining days. It will be my honor.https://loreforever19.opened.ca/2022/05/27/learning/