Category: Assignment 2 – Blog Feedback

This is my last blog comment on you. I am very happy to see your progress and growth during this period of study, which is very hard-won. I am also very lucky to be a class friend with you. I really cherish the days of studying together during this period. I think it is true that the connection between videos is very important, which I also neglected, but I believe that we will become more and more skilled in the future. And I noticed that in your video, you added the beginning and the end, which I think I also lack. Overall, your work is almost perfect, and thank you for your valuable comments on my work.https://ruoxiguo0221.opened.ca/2022/06/17/bad-experience-about-editing-videos/

Your writing is always surprising, and I have further improved my thinking after reading your blog. For example, I think the multi-angle and multi-faceted presentation you proposed is very instructive. It is well known that a good work is never single. And I think the background check that you mentioned is also a very important part. We, as an audience, tend to be more interested in things that we know about. It’s human nature. I think I’ll add some of that to my future blog as well. In addition, the interaction between the author and the audience is also very important, which is also a problem I neglected. We should consider the possibility of all ages reading our work, because it’s public, right?

I look forward to your next blog post and progress.https://ruoxiguo0221.opened.ca/2022/06/11/new-thoughts-about-my-future-design/

Best wishes,

Shining Wang

Hi, Ruoxi,

I read your blog and I think it’s great! You played your game like you always do. In this article you describe the shortcomings of ppt through your own experience, so it sounds like a really bad experience. Of course I’ve had similar experiences. Your article also made me realize my shortcomings. For example, I can also use some examples from my life when writing in the future, so that readers can better understand what I want to express. I hope we can be better and better!https://ruoxiguo0221.opened.ca/2022/06/03/my-worst-presentation-experience/

Best wishes,

Shining wang.

Hi, Ruoxi!

I read your blog carefully, and I found it very interesting. Whereas my blog is mostly about macro concepts, you use more detailed examples to explain the principles you apply to your learning experience. This further helps me to understand the learning methods and learning principles. Learning is ultimately a matter of skill. My former teachers used similar methods to get us to learn. The video you found at the end of this blog echoes the main content of this blog, which makes me understand the meaning of learning at a deeper level. I look forward to your next blog post!https://ruoxiguo0221.opened.ca/2022/05/27/new-thoughts-about-my-learning-experience/

Best wishes，

Shining Wang.

Hello, tengfei!

I read your post and it’s a great article! First, you proved the importance of multimedia teaching with a small example. This example is very detailed and vivid, which reminds me that in my primary school, our teachers also used small methods like simple experiments to help us understand the classroom content. Secondly, you also expressed your opinion in the last point of the article, and you also quote the article of Meyer to make your argument stronger. Finally, your web page as a whole is beautifully crafted, organized and enjoyable to look at, and sometimes a good look is more stimulating to explore. To put it into a nutshell, this is a very good blog, hope you keep up your efforts.https://tengfei.opened.ca/2022/05/21/blog-1-topic-2/

Best wishes，

Shining wang.